Development

The black front page, contents page AND a black double page spread is too much in my opinion, even though it electrifies the colour of the font, the black background just ruins the magazines style as it is too dark and monotone, also it is a very male colour so I cannot use this on the 4 main pages of my magazine as this gives off the wrong representation.
Also there is too much text on the double page spread, I plan on reducing the text and structuring the page into columns and breaking the text up with a picture or another pull quote or sub-heading.